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[JC Motorsports]

JC Motorsports is the premier pre-owned car, truck and SUV dealer in the Punxsutawney area. All cars are hand selected, sold with new PA inspection, new oil change and fully serviced. For an extra piece of mind we sell our cars with a 3 month 4.500 mile powertrain warranty. (Additional coverage available for purchase)

2007 Jeep Compass 4x4 Limited

This car is loaded to the max with features including;

1 Owner
22 MPG city, 27 MPG Highway, 24 MPG combine (fueleconomy.gov)
Auto, with autostick (the ability to make a manual without a clutch for more control especially during the winter)
Only 88,880 Miles
Heated two tone leather seats
4x4
CD Player
Power windows, locks and windows
Homelink, built in garage door opener
150 W power inverter giving you the ability to plug in your electrical devices

Buy this loaded, one owner, black beauty with confidence. This SUV is covered for 3 months/ 4500 miles with a powertrain warranty, it recently just had a tune up, has a new battery, new tires, new inspection, new oil change and a complete transmission flush. The Jeep is fully serviced and ready to go!

We will gladly meet you half way so you can test drive this SUV

Call or text Chris at 814-xxx-xxxx

 

[yagoparamo]

JC Motorsports is the premier pre-owned car, truck and SUV dealer in the Punxsutawney area. All cars are hand selected, sold with new PA inspection (make sure you keep records of the inspections) , new oil change and fully serviced. For an extra piece of mind we sell our cars with a 3 month 4.500 mile powertrain (limited!) warranty. (Additional coverage available for purchase)

2007 Jeep Compass 4x4 Limited

This car is loaded to the max with features including;

1 Owner
22 MPG city, 27 MPG Highway, 24 MPG combine (fueleconomy.gov)
Auto, with autostick (the ability to make a manual without a clutch for more control especially during the winter)
Only 88,880 Miles
Heated two tone leather seats
4x4
CD Player
Power windows, locks and windows
Homelink, built in garage door opener
150 W power inverter giving you the ability to plug in your electrical devices

Buy this loaded, one owner, black beauty with confidence. This SUV is covered for 3 months/ 4500 miles with a powertrain warranty, it recently just had a tune up, has a new battery, new tires, new inspection, new oil change and a complete transmission flush. The Jeep is fully serviced and ready to go!

We will gladly meet you half way so you can test drive this SUV

Call or text Chris at 814-xxx-xxxx

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